The Devil's Gift

It is a very fine, detailed, piece of work. However, there are major and/or minor issues with the story, such as, character description and background information. It is a story filled with lots of toxic/dark romance, I believe. I think you should get the main character to ditch the 'boyfriend' and get her to be with the 'stranger' from the first chapter. Still a great piece of work, continue improving on it.

Everything is just fine! Thank you so much author! I hope you can upload everyday so that I can read new things as well! Again, thank you so much!

Intriguing plot, amazing world-building, and unforgettable characters! A must-read!                                                                  

Yes, I am shamelessly giving myself a 5 star review, but I did this to say that please drop an honest review if you're reading this, it'll help a lot, I'm open to criticism.

Create character? <Yes>

Heat spread again, this time it WAS his fire. Spreading through him within his veins and blood or at least that was how it felt. Again, his concentration was broken and he found himself calming his mind. He couldn't even push his mind, how would he push her? Just looking into her eyes he would burn this whole ship down because he couldn't bear to stand his ground. He really hated himself, his body that didn't listen to him and was always ready to turn everything around him into ashes.

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"What the hell are you doing!?" said Jane as Leon replied with a "Oops, sorry bout that"